Shadowyoshi022's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[**Zelda's Lullaby**]

Did you happen to get inspiration from something? O.o
This sounds magnificent!
The lyrics that is ^^

VGSongbird responds:

Inspiration LITERALLY just came to me. I can't explain it.
But I'm glad you liked it ^_^

[[AK-49] Summer is Over]

You know...

I don't feel very much towards someone who just harasses someone after they give you constructive criticism. You honestly think that telling john0208 you, "Did his mum" makes you any more important and him less? He gave you his honest opinion on your music and you just scoff and be rude.
That's unnecessary and just plain idiotic.
I don't see why you would do that, especially when this is a top song.
You should accept criticism and use it towards your next song to get on the list again.

Anyway,
I find the song a bit repetitive and annoying.
But it still has nice lyrics.
Next time, try not to just stretch something,
Especially a cheerless song.
At least put a climax or something other than a repeating loop.
I honestly think it just ruins the piece.
The lyrics are fine quality, just.... The pronunciation could be a bit more pronounced and you should try not to warp the lyrics and provide an echo effect... Especially on this type of a melody.
It makes it blend and sound smushy.
Making it harder and provide more concentration to hear.
And in a rap, that's basically the core to it.
Hearing it and catching the rhymes.
What I do like is the story behind the lyrics.
Having your freedoms stripped and removed as your summer ends and school starts.
Removing your ability to be fun and losing your youth as the years go by.
That's the only reason I'm giving it a six.

Lyrics 1*
Melody 0*
Story 2*
Feel 2*
Chorus 1*

AK-49 responds:

thank you for the very helpful review with good criticism
the problem with john0208's review is what it prety much said is that the beat sucked (wasn't mine), our sound quality sucked, and the rapping sucked. with no criticism and just put downs, i decided i'd give him a put down back. it's called giving him a crappy response back. im fine with an honest bad opinion, such as this might be, but as long as its backed up wtih how to do better in the future. otherwise, just please zero-bomb it cause i dont want to hear how we suck and will never be better.
but in return with your review, i've been waiting for a review like this. you gave us great criticism and will be sure to use your advice to try to do better in the future. thanks for the great review man

[Dreaming Out Loud (Tilky Mix)]

I think I found this on soundscape if not

please do correct me...
Anyway, Love the song...at first I didn't even notice it was a loop until an hour later I'm like "Okay, this song cannot be this long" XD
It repeats so nicely and smoothly I never would've noticed if I hadn't been broken from my trance!
I really can't wait to hear what else you have in store!
Good luck and all :3
~Shadowyoshi

Tilkanuts responds:

Soundscape is the name of the album Dancing Fantasy came out with. The first track is Dreaming Out Loud, and this is my Loop/remake of it.

Lol apparently this song does that to people O_O
It's exactly how I intended it to happen though, and I'm happy that it's worked out the way it has.

Thank you for reviewing!

- Tilky

[Super Mario Land (Punk Cover)]

As a huge fan of SML

I recognized this song right off the bat, nice job you guys!

giftedbuttwisted responds:

Thank ya =P

[i gotz new toys :D]

is that...

a butchered version of DK64 armadillo battle with weird ass random stuff added????

BowserThedestructive responds:

ya cubase SX sucks balls which why i stuck to FL studio :P

[Unattainable Freedom]

Said it before...

And, I'll say it again, it just sucks me in, makes me forget about everything, and makes me feel one thing alone....The want for freedom....This one literally makes me feel, like the title says like theres an....Unattainable Freedom....it makes me want to leave the confines of my lives walls, and drift away....into the darkness..and just be left alone..to wither.....

BlazingDragon responds:

Thanks, I really appreciate all of your reviews including this one! Except the last part, perhaps. That's...Eerily depressing. I think I'm going to go cry myself to sleep now. O_o...Man, I really need to start composing some happy music before I make my listeners depressed! XD

Really, though, thanks for the review. :)

~BlazingDragon

[Heaven's Tears]

Yet another...

This one....it makes me get inspired and makes me want to write more poetry....it like...sucks me in....like all the others...like...hypnotic....Idk how to describe it..but...keep it up!

BlazingDragon responds:

You write poetry? That's awesome! I wish I had a talent for things of that sort, but my skills are lacking at best. :P Glad I was able to inspire you, though. Thanks for the positive input!

~BlazingDragon :D

[Ambient Evening]

I wrote poetry to this...

And....just...completely forgot about...everything.....You can't even tell when it loops..this song is like...hypnotic....I like it!

BlazingDragon responds:

Hypnotic? That is interesting, as I've never had my music described as such. Thanks for the comment! ^_^

~BlazingDragon

[Milk{Take Me Away}]

Cool song,

The beginning reminds me of paper mario lol, anyway, cool song, I like it, keep up the good work

Mrmilkcarton responds:

Not sure how to respond to that but aight cool.

[Flowing Waters]

......makes me feel like...

There is no worry in the world.....as if its all just went on and flew away, makes a burden go off my shoulders....

BlazingDragon responds:

Lifting a burden...I am perplexed and in awe when I think of the power of music. It may sound corny, but I am absolutely serious. How vibrations in the air can create such beauty is beyond me. To think that something so seemingly simple could communicate such a wide array of emotions is mind boggling!

Thank you for your review. I think I have been inspired to write a song just now. :D