Shadowyoshi022's Reviews

[What is Love?]

I have to say something

Best thing evar!
I loved it X3
Must've taken a long time to hand draw...er...mouse drawn...
I saw the secret clip...took about three times to find it all, and I have gotta say I feel really sorry for that hobo :(

[One More Brawl Taunts]

That was as epic as the others!

I have to say this to those who don't know, watch the credits all the way through, theres a special treat, I'm not saying what, but it involves pichu and pikachu xD

[Emo Kids]

I think its good

and am not giving it a bad rating because I think its evil, but, most emo people steriotypes are just plain gay...I have a few friends who are emo, who look completely normal, they just cut and ect because they're suffering from bad depression...

[Spring Ball]

Its simplistic and easy

Its pretty simple, the visual and audio quality were good, and, the music choice was good, but, its a little too easy...Its a good idea though, and, its 3:14 in the morning, so....yea, this is the last thing I'm reviewing....overall, good job, its not really good, yet not really bad, its more of a good game, so, its deserves a 7 if you ask me

[- Keytar Hero -]

Its was...ok

Ive had the same problem that Acdcrocks003 has, also the notes are a little off beat, its kinda har to get into it also but i can tell you put effort into this 8 :D

[(Naruto) Dress up Gaara!]

LOL

I FOUND IT ITS SO FRICKEN FUNNY!!!!

[**Zelda's Lullaby**]

Did you happen to get inspiration from something? O.o
This sounds magnificent!
The lyrics that is ^^

VGSongbird responds:

Inspiration LITERALLY just came to me. I can't explain it.
But I'm glad you liked it ^_^

[Ducktales - The Moon (Rem]

I swear to god they should put this...

In Sonic Fan Remix.
I love it.

[[AK-49] Summer is Over]

You know...

I don't feel very much towards someone who just harasses someone after they give you constructive criticism. You honestly think that telling john0208 you, "Did his mum" makes you any more important and him less? He gave you his honest opinion on your music and you just scoff and be rude.
That's unnecessary and just plain idiotic.
I don't see why you would do that, especially when this is a top song.
You should accept criticism and use it towards your next song to get on the list again.

Anyway,
I find the song a bit repetitive and annoying.
But it still has nice lyrics.
Next time, try not to just stretch something,
Especially a cheerless song.
At least put a climax or something other than a repeating loop.
I honestly think it just ruins the piece.
The lyrics are fine quality, just.... The pronunciation could be a bit more pronounced and you should try not to warp the lyrics and provide an echo effect... Especially on this type of a melody.
It makes it blend and sound smushy.
Making it harder and provide more concentration to hear.
And in a rap, that's basically the core to it.
Hearing it and catching the rhymes.
What I do like is the story behind the lyrics.
Having your freedoms stripped and removed as your summer ends and school starts.
Removing your ability to be fun and losing your youth as the years go by.
That's the only reason I'm giving it a six.

Lyrics 1*
Melody 0*
Story 2*
Feel 2*
Chorus 1*

AK-49 responds:

thank you for the very helpful review with good criticism
the problem with john0208's review is what it prety much said is that the beat sucked (wasn't mine), our sound quality sucked, and the rapping sucked. with no criticism and just put downs, i decided i'd give him a put down back. it's called giving him a crappy response back. im fine with an honest bad opinion, such as this might be, but as long as its backed up wtih how to do better in the future. otherwise, just please zero-bomb it cause i dont want to hear how we suck and will never be better.
but in return with your review, i've been waiting for a review like this. you gave us great criticism and will be sure to use your advice to try to do better in the future. thanks for the great review man