Did you happen to get inspiration from something? O.o
This sounds magnificent!
The lyrics that is ^^
Inspiration LITERALLY just came to me. I can't explain it.
But I'm glad you liked it ^_^
I swear to god they should put this...
In Sonic Fan Remix.
I love it.
I don't feel very much towards someone who just harasses someone after they give you constructive criticism. You honestly think that telling john0208 you, "Did his mum" makes you any more important and him less? He gave you his honest opinion on your music and you just scoff and be rude.
That's unnecessary and just plain idiotic.
I don't see why you would do that, especially when this is a top song.
You should accept criticism and use it towards your next song to get on the list again.
I find the song a bit repetitive and annoying.
But it still has nice lyrics.
Next time, try not to just stretch something,
Especially a cheerless song.
At least put a climax or something other than a repeating loop.
I honestly think it just ruins the piece.
The lyrics are fine quality, just.... The pronunciation could be a bit more pronounced and you should try not to warp the lyrics and provide an echo effect... Especially on this type of a melody.
It makes it blend and sound smushy.
Making it harder and provide more concentration to hear.
And in a rap, that's basically the core to it.
Hearing it and catching the rhymes.
What I do like is the story behind the lyrics.
Having your freedoms stripped and removed as your summer ends and school starts.
Removing your ability to be fun and losing your youth as the years go by.
That's the only reason I'm giving it a six.
thank you for the very helpful review with good criticism
the problem with john0208's review is what it prety much said is that the beat sucked (wasn't mine), our sound quality sucked, and the rapping sucked. with no criticism and just put downs, i decided i'd give him a put down back. it's called giving him a crappy response back. im fine with an honest bad opinion, such as this might be, but as long as its backed up wtih how to do better in the future. otherwise, just please zero-bomb it cause i dont want to hear how we suck and will never be better.
but in return with your review, i've been waiting for a review like this. you gave us great criticism and will be sure to use your advice to try to do better in the future. thanks for the great review man
I like it
Please do continue... :)
Completely Removed the Percussion
That was my favorite part of the song, hearing that snare and the bass really set me in love with the song.
Without it, its not the same.
Though, I have to say its good.
I just really miss the percussion
I think I found this on soundscape if not
please do correct me...
Anyway, Love the song...at first I didn't even notice it was a loop until an hour later I'm like "Okay, this song cannot be this long" XD
It repeats so nicely and smoothly I never would've noticed if I hadn't been broken from my trance!
I really can't wait to hear what else you have in store!
Good luck and all :3
Soundscape is the name of the album Dancing Fantasy came out with. The first track is Dreaming Out Loud, and this is my Loop/remake of it.
Lol apparently this song does that to people O_O
It's exactly how I intended it to happen though, and I'm happy that it's worked out the way it has.
Thank you for reviewing!
Liek it ^^
I'm going to play this...but
Still, even without audiosurf this song is addictive! I don't see why anyone wouldn't like this song if they didn't have audiosurf :D
As a huge fan of SML
I recognized this song right off the bat, nice job you guys!
Thank ya =P
newgrounds.com — Your #1 online entertainment & artist community! All your base are belong to us.